Loved the story, but I didn’t see it adhere too well to the theme.

The characters were fun, the setting was good, and the cultural details were interesting.

Wrapped up a little too quickly, perhaps.

It’s a shame, because I wouldn’t mind hearing more about these characters.

I appreciated the work and the interactions. But, I would have liked to know some more about Snik's reason for being there in the first place.

This was a fine story, though I unfortunately did not feel truly captivated in the end. The interactions and dialogue seemed a bit forced and unnatural to me.

Good character interaction, although the plot is a bit predictable.