Really great story! Thanks!
That was a blast! Great story-telling and fun read
Always want to write more!
Good point! Thanks!
Enjoyable read. Thanks for submitting!
Very nice! Great story to read!
lol. Hilarious. Engaging. Fun. Inventive. Perfect!
thanks for reading!
Fun to read and enjoyable! Thanks for the story!
I enjoyed the story, but it was a little hard to read. I think you were trying to go for an accent, which I caught on after a while. Could be really fun with a little cleanup!
This is a really fun story! And I appreciate someone being able to tell me why horses are used in futuristic battles!
Well done!
thanks! Love a big cast. Even in a short story 😅
Thanks!
incredibly kind! Thank you!
phenomenal story!
it’s true 😂
Fun story! Love a great not so bad guy tale!
tell your wife she’s my favorite 😂😎
Well written. Clear theme. Very nice!
thanks for the feedback! I tried to insinuate that Lillian had told him as much. I really appreciate you’re thoughts on the story!
great story!
super kind! Thank you!
brutal and simple. Well told!
great read! Great story!
well told story!
I enjoyed it!
Thank you! It’s supposed to be him stuck in the rocks and his situation. I appreciate you’re feedback!
thanks for your feedback! I’m definitely used to longer form!
thanks a lot!
means a lot! Thanks!
great twist on who’s working behind the scenes!
thanks! Really appreciate the comment!
with a theme like consequences, somebody is gonna get deleted 😅
vampires galore!
brutal. Thanks for submitting!
