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Well done!

thanks! Love a big cast. Even in a short story 😅

Thanks!

incredibly kind! Thank you!

phenomenal story!

it’s true 😂

Fun story! Love a great not so bad guy tale!

tell your wife she’s my favorite 😂😎

Well written. Clear theme. Very nice!

thanks for the feedback! I tried to insinuate that Lillian had told him as much. I really appreciate you’re thoughts on the story!

great story!

super kind! Thank you!

brutal and simple. Well told!

great read! Great story!

well told story!

I enjoyed it!

Thank you! It’s supposed to be him stuck in the rocks and his situation. I appreciate you’re feedback!

thanks for your feedback! I’m definitely used to longer form! 

thanks for reading!

great story!

thanks a lot!

means a lot! Thanks!

great twist on who’s working behind the scenes!

thanks! Really appreciate the comment!

with a theme like consequences, somebody is gonna get deleted 😅

vampires galore!

brutal. Thanks for submitting!

brutal and heartbreaking. I love it!

great story! Tight and clean. Well told!

neat and tidy! Great read

just a great clean read!

thanks!

killer story!!

great story! Loved it!

thanks for submitting this! Great!

love a good origin story!

super clever and creative! Loved it!

thanks! A debtor is never satisfied 😎