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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Cleverness | #755 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Playability | #804 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Artistic Style | #970 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Theme | #1330 | 2.000 | 2.000 |
Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- Game feels a bit directionless? Like I didn't know what I was supposed to do when I was playing it, maybe in the future add a tutorial to help get your players started?
Did you include your Game Design Document as a Google Drive link?
yes
Seriously... did you include your Game Design Document?
yes
Is your game set to Public so we can see it?
yes
Tell us about your game!
The second shadow is coming. Can you survive with the resources you have, or will you die trying? It's time to face your fears.
Extra Notes
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Comments
I have some points for improvement:
The premise of the game sounds nice, but I was missing some sort of gameplay introduction inside the game. Also, I think you are underselling your theme interpretation inside your GDD a bit. In the introduction you make quite clear how you incorporated the ideas of Shadows and Alchemy.
hey there thanks for giving me some feedback i really appriate a tutorial will probably fix most of the problems with the gameplay and some fixes here and there would improve things