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A jam submission

Depths of the MindView game page

Our submission for the Pirate Software Game Jam 15
Submitted by WinterDyzrupt — 1 day, 6 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Artistic Style#9703.0003.000
Theme#13302.0002.000
Cleverness#14712.0002.000
Playability#14862.0002.000

Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • Good use of shadow, but alchemy fell flat. Character movement was simple and easy to get around. Using shadows to block monsters was creative. Make more games!

Did you include your Game Design Document as a Google Drive link?
Yes, in multiple places

Seriously... did you include your Game Design Document?
Yes, in multiple places

Is your game set to Public so we can see it?
Yes

Tell us about your game!
Our game is a turn-based dungeon crawler! We went this route because of our capabilities and what we thought we could reasonably push, and it created a great medium for the theme -- Shadows and Alchemy.

The main character will traverse the dungeon while absorbing shadows to transmute them into upgrades and abilities. In this regards, the player is exploring the shadows in their mind. They'll use their powers to defeat demons, and if a demon is too big to defeat, well... they'll have to change its form.

Extra Notes
Thank you Thor and team for running these events. The message you put out there is lifesaving. You've motivated me to do something I wanted to do for over a decade. Keep being awesome and we'll keep going forward.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

I think the concept you have here is great, it really incentivizes the player to take their time and think about their choices. I think where the game fell a little flat for me is that it doesn't clearly enough let the player know what those choices are and what the goal is. 

I found myself confused as soon as I started. What am I doing what's my goal? why is my screen all black. (I figured that last one out quickly but for a second I thought it broke lol). 

I feel like an expanded tutorial to start would greatly help new players so they understand what they are supposed to be doing. A key of what the different objects on the ground are and what they will do. why the player should be looking for them etc... 

Also having to completely restart every time you die was pretty frustrating.

Developer

Thank you for playing and the feedback! We greatly appreciate it..

Submitted(+1)

Since you were asking for an honest review I'm going to includes scores and pretend I was a judge haha!

Definitely some cool ideas here. Being totally surrounded by darkness, and absorbing darkness juice to use as a resource is very neat. Having combat with anything other than the most basic of enemies being brutal is also something that brings out the horror aspects a lot here.

For theme, you definitely got the shadows part down, but I think "absorbing shadows to transmute them into upgrades and abilities" is a bit of a stretch for alchemy. The shadows part is done well enough though that I think I would give you a 3/5

For Artistic Style I think all the backgrounds and sprites look pretty good for whats there (keeping in mind this is supposed to be a prototype of a game). I think it falls a little with some of the UI. The extra bit of line work and filigree you've added to all the boxes in the UI don't feel like they mesh with the spooky aspect of the game. Specifically the extra bit of detail around the health bar meant I didn't grok that is was a health bar until I got a health pickup. 4/5

For Cleverness I am only rating on mechanics, not on story as I didn't complete the game (we'll get to that in a second). Mechanically this is a pretty bare bones traditional roguelike/sokoban-esque deal. I got to the point where I had two abilities, place darkness and shadow strike. Place Darkness is definitely interesting and there is a lot of design space you can probably (and maybe already did). 3/5

For Playability I think there are a couple of issues. Firstly there is a lack of checkpointing. Getting killed by the big giant enemy is very easy to accidentally do. The exact tiles that will kill you aren't immediately obvious on first playthrough and there is no prompt to the player that forces them to consider what they are doing. That would be fine if it didn't make the player spend 80+ turns (I counted) going back through that first section again, picking up everything (including the secret) just to get back there. A simple checkpoint after escaping the first Hand Eye Coordination monster would prevent this, and while it would mean it would lessen the fear of death to some extent, having to repeat moves in a more puzzley game like this is extremely frustrating. This is the reason I didn't play the game to completion.

The second issue has to do with memory. Having to memorize a maze is not particularly exciting for me to have to do as a player. Implementing a fog of war that is permanently lifted would make this not be an issue. You could still have the darkness by making tiles not in line of sight very dark, but being able to see where you've been is more annoying than anything else. Playability 2/5 with the caveat that it would be very easy to fix these issues and bring that score way up.

Unsolicited Ideas Time. Playing around with fog of war is super interesting. Instead of having Darkness Juice™ just lying around, you could have exploring the fog of war directly fill the darkness meter. This would make the player more careful about moving super quickly because they wouldn't want to "waste" the darkness. If the player has collected all the darkness but have actually wasted enough of it that they can't advance, then a checkpoint could reset the fog of war in an area. If you were to implement the more permanent fog of war I mentioned, you could even have set sequences where returning to a place you've already explored is now suddenly different which would add a very spooky section. 

This is probably way more review than you wanted, but hopefully it isn't terrible. I think your game is fun with some frustrating points that could easily be ironed out. Have fun out there!

Developer

Thank you so much for playing the game and giving me a review. I greatly appreciate it and it has improved my day. I understand where your points are coming from and I think they’re completely fair and good.

Submitted(+2)

really got me spooked, especially when that giant demon came outta nowhere then stopped right before me

Our play tester would jump every time, even though they knew it was coming.

Submitted(+2)

Cool game! I love when you get the lantern in the beginning by walking up. a cool reveal.

Thank you!