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- A good start on your game dev journey. Music was great, with further refinement of your style and maybe even using different techniques from the genres you pulled inspiration from like Tech trance, industrial, drum and bass. The Art looked good for a prototype, their is a lot of room for improvement. Specifically character silhouettes and animations. For the writing some parts of dialogue between the father and pc were rough, however their is a lot that can be explored with the journal entries spread through out. The GDD was very short with some of the mechanics not having a graphic to thoroughly explain what what each feature is and how they look. Adding more details and outlining the mechanics can help let the reader know what they do and their intended function in game is. For a short project this was a good start, keep making cool games!
Link to your Game Design Doc on Google Drive.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QcCHglFxFPqvTLfx9a31Dv65lM0OQcCasl-ujLZVfUA/edit?usp=sharing
Have you checked that your GDD is publicly accessible ?
Yes
Is your game set to public on itch.io so we can see it?
Yes
Summarise your game!
Adventure in a fantasy world about technology vs nature.
Damage enemies by touching them or give them flowers.
Find treasures and solve puzzles, multiple endings.
Simple controls:
AWSD: Move.
E: Interact.
Escape: Pause.
Please explain how your game fits the theme:
The player embodies a resurrected human turned into a killing machine.
The game fits the theme with the main mechanic of damaging enemies with your robot body, you are the weapon.
Is there anything you'd like the judges to pay particular attention to?
Main story (writing and adventure).
Sound/Music.
Art.
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Comments
Nice work! Enjoyed the story and appreciate the multiple endings. You managed to squeeze in quite a lot in the limited time. Puzzles, story, combat, upgrades and multiple levels. Nice!
Had a great time working on this! Good luck <3
Awesome game! I love that you can give your enemies flowers :D I got stuck at the end! Any hints? :)
At the end, when the scientist tells you to go back, you can ignore him and go to the lab anyway.
This is a great game, lots of re-playability. I loved it.
Good job! The effor put is cleary seen. There is a lot of different regions and game isn't just "move and do stuff" there are story elements as well.