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A jam submission

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Last line
Submitted by H.I — 5 hours, 23 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Respect Of the Theme#151.2371.750
Effort#151.9452.750
Fun to play#151.5912.250
Originality#151.7682.500
Beauty#151.4142.000

Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • Too bad your game is for phone (apk), Some efforts have been made, without clinging to your game, there are points to improve like the rotation of your main character, keep it up and progress! :)

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Comments

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

I'm sorry, it's not possible for me to testing out the apk.. 
You may have a gameplay-video?

Developer

Thank you for your review, i don't have a gameplay yet, but i will made one :) 

Developer

Hey, the gameplay is complete, you can check it out :) 

Submitted

Thanks a lot!

I think it could be funny to play. It may not hit the theme, but I like the sound.

The volume settings would be better with sliders in my opinion, especially for a mobile game.

Developer

No problem, thank you i will do better next time :) 

Jam Host(+1)

Your game is for android, I find it interesting but there are lots of problems in your game like the theme (I don't necessarily see it). But positive point you your game works correctly! Keep it up and progress!

Developer

Thank you for your review, thanks :) and sorry. 

Jam Host(+1)

No problem, we don't have restriction about the type of game :) 

Submitted(+1)

Unable to play, withholding rating.

Developer(+1)

Thank you for your review, sorry :) 

(+1)

Unfortunately I cannot try this due to it being APK. 

Developer

Thank you for your review, sorry bro:(

Submitted(+1)

Why APK ? can try it, sry 

Developer

Thank you for your review,  your game files are maintained well, i made games on a phone so with that i only made games for phone, so i can test it. :)