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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall | #2 | 3.639 | 3.639 |
| Audio | #2 | 3.667 | 3.667 |
| Visuals | #3 | 4.333 | 4.333 |
| Writing | #5 | 3.556 | 3.556 |
| Mechanics | #6 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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- Well done for pulling this off solo! This was a very well rounded, well finished entry. I really appreciated the effort you put into the art, even though the emphasis was on the writing. It was full of charm, and fleshed out the world and it's characters wonderfully. I enjoyed the characters that you set up, but I do feel like you could have added some extra written elements to better flesh out the town and it's tight knit community. That said, I think the economy of the written content deserves a big high five. Things felt tight, and well paced, and I appreciated the regular interactions between short blasts of text. Extra high fives for creating a complete story with a clear beginning, middle and end. You really took me on a whole adventure, which I commend you on. Well done!
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Very cute and straight forward game! Well done for a 1st game!
I loved this! Very quirky!
The art reminded me alot of night in the woods <3 very pretty.
Strange your project was in html lol, Having the art and text being on a full application screen would have gone a long way.
A lot of the narrative was going back and forth, but loved the characters. They are all doing such dodgy things, and at the end the kid was like "the community is really nice and tight knit" lol. I liked the undertones of something else going on. Good job!
I really enjoyed the story. It was short and quick to the point, very intuitive when I comes to figuring out what you have to do.
Hey, Thank you for the wonderful comment - I've resumbitted the game as it was oringinally intended. As a download and play. Please have a look at the updated version - as there should be music and image