The atmosphere is great. You can feel the threat. I really like the sounds you use during your intro.

I love the way you use the scale. I really like the melody. The sounds you used is very good too. I feel like this music can be used in a sci-fi setting which is very cool!

Awesome atmospheric intro, it really drew me into your 'world'. I appreciate how you explored the scale you chose, and how your piece commits to one strong theme and focuses on building it up. Great job!

I really like the sounds you used! Really great piece. 

The best way I can describe this is if there was an otherworldly threat but the threat was just a bunch of sand and I mean that is a good way.