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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| BEST THEME | #1 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| BEST GAME (General) | #4 | 3.222 | 3.222 |
| SCARIEST GAME | #8 | 2.444 | 2.444 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This is a very well-written piece of interactive fiction. I like how the setup for this story hints at the underlying coercion and power at play but there is still a lot of ambiguity and uncertainty. The choices presented to the reader were framed well and did reflect very interesting internal dilemmas, even if maybe a little too specific to be binary. I am really interested to see how this story plays out, particularly the morbid themes hinted at by the content warning and how they integrate into the existing narrative. There is a good flow to the prose and it is very evocative without being excessive. Really looking forward to the continuation of this story - let me know if/when it gets updated!
Thanks for submitting this game to the SCREAM EMPIRE game jam!
- SCREAM CATALOGUE
Thank you very much for the comment! I'm glad you liked the writing and the theme exploration, and I'll make sure to shoot you a message when it's finished.
Cheers! Congrats also on winning the 'BEST THEME' category for the SCREAM EMPIRE jam - it is in my opinion well deserved!
Very good story!! I think tisha is not the same but I hope to read the end
Thank you! I hope to post the end very soon.
This was very well written and very intriguing! I hope you get to finish it soon! I really like choice games.
I would suggest you'd put a music on the background. There are some great record labels, like CryoChamber, that allow you to use one of their songs if your project is non-commercial.
Great stuff, keep it up!
Thank you very much! I'm trying my best to juggle writing and real life and I hope to put out a finished version soon. Also I'll definitely check out the music.
Nice story! I really liked it. It falls a bit short now but I'll play it again when it's finished.
Thank you! I know that unfortunately it's very short, but I hope to complete it soon.
The story is good and close to the theme and I like that it's a bit non-liner. But that's all
unfortunately I didn't have the time to finish it! The second part contains the horror bits, I promise. And thank you for the comment.