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This is a very well-written piece of interactive fiction. I like how the setup for this story hints at the underlying coercion and power at play but there is still a lot of ambiguity and uncertainty. The choices presented to the reader were framed well and did reflect very interesting internal dilemmas, even if maybe a little too specific to be binary. I am really interested to see how this story plays out, particularly the morbid themes hinted at by the content warning and how they integrate into the existing narrative. There is a good flow to the prose and it is very evocative without being excessive. Really looking forward to the continuation of this story - let me know if/when it gets updated!

Thanks for submitting this game to the SCREAM EMPIRE game jam! 

- SCREAM CATALOGUE

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Thank you very much for the comment! I'm glad you liked the writing and the theme exploration, and I'll make sure to shoot you a message when it's finished.

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Cheers! Congrats also on winning the 'BEST THEME' category for the SCREAM EMPIRE jam - it is in my opinion well deserved!