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A jam submission

UnraveledView game page

After a disturbing dispatch call, Officer Brooks fights to survive the horrors and face a mysterious killer.
Submitted by rockes (@rockespecialee), Stephanie Glover (@APRichardson89), AndreiOlinic, Shumaro, FilipPtr β€” 2 hours, 18 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Story#303.2403.500
Enjoyment (Best Game)#772.9323.167
Sound Design#793.0863.333
Horror#982.4692.667
Aesthetics#993.0863.333

Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

The game was very unique. I enjoyed it and have rated it. Can you please rate my game too.

Submitted(+1)

Basically, a few more levels and it's a full game on any platform's store :D

Good story, good narrative, nice voice acting and gameplay is enjoyable. Had a great experience here. Worth continuing!

Developer(+1)

Oww thank you, we want to improve the game after the results and this give some inspiration

Submitted (1 edit) (+2)

Woah, this was an experience worth revisiting for!

This is seriously an epic submission and a strong contender. The fact this doesn’t have many votes yet is a shame as this is an excellent game! The graphics worked well and the audio was far above par for even comparable major titles. Last but not least, this had a chilling story that was well worth the experience.

All of above said, it is not flawless. There is some evident bugs and the horror could have used a bit more love, which is where I personally rated the lowest. Aa well, I really would have liked to see the controls implemented into the game design instead of a wall of text.

Otherwise, major congratulations! You earned a 5/5 from me on Story and Sound Design!

Developer

Oww thanks dude, yeah it was hard to make a good horror factor without custom animations or some sounds, so we decided to try with a survival game mode.

(2 edits)

Overall, Nicely done, for quite a,, beginner'' type of game this is looking fantastic might say that after trying some others' short self-made games I tend to believe this is one of the best out of what I did play.

And, congratz to the whole team, actors, and storytelling! It's amazing what you did guys!

Now, feedbacks for the future, as I understand this game was made on turbo mode, quickly so again it's amazing but there are some things I wanna say as a horror game enjoyer, and hopefully, this will be well received.

-Sound: The intro is amazing, the way everything I hear is nicely done and edited, the main thing I must say it's the part where I can hear everywhere the sound, and it's kinda confusing. I hear the intention was to get us in confusion since they keep being heard from the stairs, the second floor, but at some point, the sound kept going and it was already expected things, which cut the horror environment a lot. As well a piece of background music, a music box, or a soft static noise or breathing or anything would be as well interesting to hear while exploring the labyrinth on the second floor.

-Environment: The only thing I can say about it is the second floor the corridor lacks objects, furniture or things to be seen. It is like an empty place with one shell in the first place, and nothing else to be seen or noticed. The living room, the stairs the kitchen, the bathroom, and the rooms, in general, are nicely done and made out, so there is nothing to be said on that. 

Optional: Perhaps in the future more things to interact with. 


-The actors/voice: Great, clean, and nicely placed. The only thing is sometimes the voice is going over the ghost/spirits sounds and it's a bit hard to understand( at the beginning) 


-Settings: The main issue is the volume blasting out from the begging. Nedd to get out of the game/tab to calibrate the overall sound of the game to not get my ears raped literally.

-The missing controls. I know there are on the site but keep looking for -them it is quite annoying. 

-Missing subtitles on the game. If I'm not a great English speaker/fluent I might have problems with that case.


Bugs/To know:

-The moobs keep spawning sometimes when I try to unlock the rooms and I'm in the inventory section. If that was planned then it's alright but I get dmg while I'm being on the menu(ESC) or inventory.

-When I try to use a key sometimes it say it,, doesn't fit'' but after I try again it does. As well I click on the door to open and I waste bullets.

-Add more bullets. Sometimes it can be missed due to the movement of the mob and on the first try I had 0 bullets and a mob chasing me, cuz I didn't make progress to the floor with the drop.


A last note, once again the game is amazing. I KNOW the hard work and time spent on it so I really appreciate it, so good job for you guys! Looking forward to the next games. The horror atmosphere was there so ill give it a 10/10 for a short team-self-made game. 

Developer(+1)

Thanks for your comments!, yeah, for the time it was hard to make a good horror factor or pulish all the game, but yeah it's important to have something interesting more than just objects to fill the rooms.

Submitted(+2)

Planning to play a bunch of submissions tomorrow. Looking forward to this one.

Submitted

Ending up finding a bug where the game just fired all my shots one after another when I tried to use a key on a door with my weapon out.