I like the general layout, but I don't see myself using this at my table.  Also, isn't the jam limited to 8-pages submissions?

it looks awesome, really sweet design and layout. My honest critique: I don’t see a lot of Shadowdark ruleset incorporated. Like, hardly any. So it would be tough for me to use this without a lot of prep of my own.

The layout and design of the pages are amazing!

This is the BEST layout of any submission in this Jam. 

I'm normally extremely ink-conscious when it comes to printing but I had to have this in my hands physically. 

Well done sir! 👏👏👏

This reminds me of some of the best Mork Borg has to offer.  Thanks for putting this up!

Looks really nice on the screen, but I like to print things out for game day. Those solid black pages make it impossible to print.

On page 11, activating Scroll of Speak to the dead, you mention rolling an 'Arcana check'.  Was this supposed to be 'Intelligence check'?

This looks so good!