I just played this AND IT IS SO CUTE. The art is so nice and the writing is good, I was wondering about the ending I got cause I'm a little confused. But also saw you will release the full thing after the jam, so I'll look forward to that.
Really enjoyed the VA also!

I’ve been wanting to play this since you posted on Discord and I finally have time to do so!!! This is so late, I’m sorry >.< I love the UI and scene transitions, your page is so charming, the use of colors amazing, and the silhouette characters are nicely drawn. The title card for each chapter is simple and effective (page turning SFX is nice), it’s like playing a picture book. I hope more comments and downloads will help you out of itch.io’s false positive quarantine.

There are crashes I suspect is caused by leftover code from a heavily skinned template. You may also want to give proofreading another go when you have time, but I can tell how much heart goes into this. The first panorama of The Candytown is so cute (I’m kinda hoping it would stop scrolling when I talk with Edelweiss, though. Talking with a scrolling background gives me nausea, I’m sorry!

I like the plot. It has potentials and I’m sure it’ll be very nice when the game gets all polished up (and the pesky warning goes away). Congrats for such a beautiful entry!

The story is pretty interesting. I didn’t expect it to become so serious after completing the first 2 chapters. Also, the change of the UI based on the scenes is very cool, overall the UI is really gorgeous. Great effort! I loved the character design and backgrounds too! They look really, really nice.