Wow, I'm impressed you got this all done on your own, even though you used some assets, the ability to do this all alone is great! The music is very peaceful, the starting scene with text going out of the image was slightly unsatisfying but not the biggest issue. I like that the girls fill art is a higabana (not sure if thats the right name) but its a cute touch especially fits the overall theme here. The little movements all the characters do is very nice and especially the altering camera angles, and animations as they run across the screen or pop up from below. Its all very charming and works well to avoid the biggest issue of how static a lot of VNs are. Great work! And of course the story is very nice, the ending was very sweet.

A wonderful piece of work, the story is well-written and the background music effectively immerses the reader into the story’s atmosphere. I specifically like the falling petals scene; it’s really beautiful!

Perhaps the UI could have more color contrast to improve readability, but other than that, this is an excellent piece! I’m looking forward to seeing the complete game!

i really enjoyed the presentation of this dream. the visual presentation is really inspiring! the scene with the text in the window, and the sliding images like everything was a puppet show, i loved all of that. and the story of the recluse and the ghost girl was quite sweet, how it began to open up his world... amazing work!