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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Score | #58 | 4.041 | 4.667 |
Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Log Line
Edie must pass her Trial of Ascension in order to become a witch... And finally go home.
Content Warnings
Violence, abuse, mental illness, and heavy topics such as misogyny, death, and isolation.
Team Members
Vextera, Orpheo Fenn, Joshua Alday, Yume Zingi, Kija, Julia Sydni DeNigris, Aaron Palmer, Valerie Quiñonez
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Comments
This is so aesthetically beautiful and well-polished :3 Good luck with development of the rest of the game!
Thank you! :D
I watched the demo and can't wait to see the rest. will love to play this game.
Thank you so much! We're super excited to continue development!
- lovely writing
- nice art style
- noticeable amount of mistakes
- easily bugged through a few random key mashes
- diction, grammar and spelling mistakes throughout the game ("plain" on her face, not "playing")
- inconsistent tense (There are six of us - the narration is in past-tense, not present)
- "skip read text" function is too inconsistent. Often, it skips 1 or 2 lines before stopping.
- Colette and Edie's dynamic. I have a soft spot for relationships like theirs
Thank you for the feedback!
The voice lines were added pretty close to the submission due date, and it only occurred to me afterward that they'd need subtitles. That is definitely something we plan to correct in the release version of the game.
Thoughts vs narration is something that we toyed with a little bit. Edie is the main character; all the thoughts seen are hers and hers alone. This seems to be common feedback for us , so we're looking into ways of making a clear distinction between Edie's thoughts and regular narration!
Would you be willing to give us expanded feedback on the diction, grammar, and spelling mistakes? I'm normally pretty good about that sort of thing, but if I knew what exactly what I was looking for, it would make it easier to correct! (As a note, the "plain" in your example was intended, as it's a shortened version of "plain as the nose on your face"; it was meant to be clear and easy for anyone to see.)
DM me if you wouldn't mind giving some additional feedback on that! :) Thank you again!
Hi, sorry for leaving you hanging - life. I'd love to give you more detailed feedback but I can't seem to be able to DM you here. How would you like me to contact you? Twitter, Discord or somewhere else?
Twitter would probably be easiest! We're @tideheadstudios.
Thank you!
Good Art, Good story hook
Thank you! :)