I was so enraptured by the writing it actually came as a shock when I was hit with the unimplemented ending - the writing is super engrossing, and it sounds like a great, solid base for your game down the line. I also love the cover art - the character is super cute. :3
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i'd love to see the more fleshed out version down the road :D
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Rubber Wizard Is Going Through ItI like these sorts of alchemy games, it seems like you had quite a lot of combinations planned! The introductions for all of the ingredients adds a bit of fun flavor and foreshadowing. I hope you'll have a chance to continue developing the story!
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Haunt the VaultShame you didn't have time to write out all the endings. The writing was cute and well paced.
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RUN RUN! Dog Park Fun!This is currently flagged as Windows-only, but Twine games are almost always playable in browser – I don’t see why this one wouldn’t be. I think if you upload the zip file you already have and mark it as “playable in the browser”, it will Just Work because your entrypoint is already “index.html”. Give it a look at https://twinery.org/cookbook/starting/twine2/publishing_on_itchio.html#step-3-uploading-project-files
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