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A jam submission

Does Not BelongView game page

they don't belong here...
Submitted by Gabrielndjldc — 14 hours, 28 minutes before the deadline
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Submitted

Parabéns pelo jogo, os gráficos realmente estão incríveis, acredito que com mais tempo o jogo ficaria muito bom, o único ponto a ser melhorado é a narrativa que está bem simples.

Probably the best part of the game is the narrative. Sorry, but that's true. 
While in other games you have a linear story, the character, simple set-up. Gabriel's game showcases a wide range of stories happening in the same environment. How can it possibly be marked as "simple"? I would really love to hear your assessment, as personally your game is the one, which needs more story development and "bug fixes" as it crashed numerous times for me. 
Just an honest opinion, nothing factual, but I doubt you paid attention to what was going on in the story and didn't quite comprehend the narrative. 

Submitted

achei bem massa, ótimo trabalho!

Developer(+1)

vlw mano!

(+2)

Minha analise sobre seu jogo: 

-Gráficos:

Positivos, pois usa bem a ideia de jogos de PS1/PS2 (Estética de Televisões de Tubo)

Modelos dos personagens bem trabalhados.

Cenários, + ou - mas não deixa a desejar.

Interação com o cenário: Muito boa.

-Jogabilidade:

Não possui um objetivo, que torna o jogo em si um pouco entediante.

Enredo do Jogo;

-Bastante criativo, que chama a atenção do Jogador.

Nota final: 5,9/10

Submitted(+1)

cara, faz com o meu?

Ta feito 🙏🙏

Submitted

Po, amigo. Analisa o meu por gentileza <33

Submitted

também ia pedir mas agora acho que fica demais KK

Submitted

Tem como fazer com meu também? por favor 

Highly disagree with your assessment of the game, which is purely subjective. 5,9/10, really? Did you even play the game? 

"Cenários, + ou - mas não deixa a desejar." - what do you mean by saying "nothing desired"? The game focuses on the narrative of a scientist creating a portal to the "Mesozoic Era" and accidently the dinosaurs come out and towards the end clearly conquer the earth. It is very opposite of what you said, because if the game had a continuation, it would showcase very deep and interesting story. 
"Não possui um objetivo, que torna o jogo em si um pouco entediante." - wrong. Throughout the gameplay you are giving multiple objectives and it keeps the game simple, yet wanting more from the gameplay and clearly focuses on the nuanced situation created. 
In the end, it is your biased opinion, but very far from the truth and specifically those 2 lines, which I focused on are just straight up false. The game is good and definitely deserves more appreciation.

Feel sorry for people, who asked you to "analyze" their games, because you are pretty bad at it. Trust me, I've done over thousands of reviews and yours is up there in the "bad" list for sure.
Good day.

Submitted(+1)

Cara ta muito foda kkkkkkkkkkkk essa vibe psx ficou muito show, parabéns! 

Developer(+1)

vlw mano