It matches the theme, sounds nice, however all this huge room u got feels unused. I appreciate the silence and all but some sort of ambience would be nice imo.

Great string and choir dissonance/consonance play. They feel like a solid unit moving along the track filling the dramatic general space and void in the piece. I really liked your usage of silences to achieve this. My only critique would be that the sustained choir feels intense but a bit piercing, because of its shrill timbre, maybe some eq/reverb to tame it a bit or make it morph at the end would improve the listening experience. You nailed the theme and I appreciate the touch of the bells tolling for the dead and the sense of storytelling. 

Movement here is glacial but dramatic. That little bass swell at the end is a nice touch!

I think you've nailed the vibe of this jam pretty well - my only criticism is that I would've liked to have heard a little more development overall. You've got some cool ideas, and I think the piece would benefit if they were fleshed out and explored a bit.

Thanks for sharing, and keep up the good work :)