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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Story Quality | #4 | 3.395 | 3.667 |
| Writing Quality | #6 | 3.240 | 3.500 |
| Overall Creativity | #7 | 3.395 | 3.667 |
Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Word Count
500
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Nice summer story, I wish I had ever seen a mall that had a store that interesting! I found shooting at the paws an interesting idea, as was burning the spider.
it is simple and entertaining, congrats!
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
This is a short and sweet story and I loved it!
Thank you tank! With 500 words, it's tough to do something great :)
Yeah I agree, I had to compress the ending of my story due to the word limit, or else it could have been better lol.
As for your story, it was one of the first ones to be submitted, and I liked it from that moment, glad to be finally able to rate it!