Interesting start. I included it in my Yogscast Game Jam compilation video series, if you’d like to take a look. :) 

Really beautiful aesthetic :O It's a shame you ran out of time but the animation and visuals you have already are really interesting. I would love to see an updated version after the jam is over! Also, huge congrats on submitting to your first jam, that's amazing!! :)

It's a shame you ran out of time to add the text. However, you have a very unique visual style here which I really like - I think you should go ahead and finish it after the jam is over, I'd love to give it a play :)

Was very confused at first but the idea seemed cool and interesting

Really cool style, sad I  couldn't see what your actual vision for this game    was.

Congratulations on participating in your first game jam! Even if I can't give it a high rating, keep up the good work. And from this jam you've also learnt that it's a good idea to have a functional build early in the process - unexpected things can always happen ;)

I imagine it would have been awesome! What is there looks cool.

Shame about the text upload issues. Though if you'd told me it was a deliberate conceptual art piece for the game to be in your imagination, I'd probably have believed you :P 

Ah well! Hopefully you can get a working version up after the end of the jam.