I enjoyed your game very much!
Couple of things that I'd like to point out (some might be quite subjective, sorryy):
- Everything looks a bit surreal, and it matches your role of an imaginary friend so well;
- Gradual change of colors makes the experience very immersive;
- With your style of depicting things I think you could go even further and make the poems more impressionist and/or methaphorical too :) I just feel that images you create are really powerful. And in the last frame, where you get all the explanation about the situation, the writing felt a little bit intense. I was given lots of information, more than this frame would need. I would probably separate it into a couple of frames so that the descriptions were more poetic (like in your other frames) to have more time to live through the characters' emotions. Hope I could explain my idea :)
- The mechanics of 'activating' the images was fun to do! The only moment is that I wish I could proceed with controlling everything with my keyboard instead of switching to the mouse — that part distracted me a bit as previously I mainly needed only the space bar :)
- I think it would be really cool to have some sound effects for the characters speaking: I mean probably not a voiceover, but mumbling or something like that. The immersion is really great as it is now, but I believe it could be even more immersive hahah
- I understand it does not quite relate to game at this point, but just wanted to tell that the idea of playing as an imaginary character (and exploring something being not actually real) sounds really exciting!
Thank you for this experience and also for your attention to all other games you've played :)