I like that kind of games. I was into the story (even if I was confused sometimes and wasn't sure what was happening), but the link didn't work, and to be honest I didn't understood where a code was asked? I reached the "END (?)" without needing it.
Having explanations and references to some words was a nice bonus. I agree with the other comment saying that it would have been nice to have different colors for the buttons that were meant to continue the story and the others that were notes.
I think if you continue this game or make another one, some music would be nice, as well as different backgrounds depending on what's happening. It would dynamize the reader/player's experience as well as make everything clearer for them.
Keep the good work!
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Hi hi! So sorry for the late response!
Thank you so much for your comment and feedback ^^
The END(?) is meant to be reached without the code. There is a Tumblr blog with a password that will provide additional end-of-story lore — that is what the code is for. The link is a bit buggy within the Twine game, here is the link if you want to check it out: https://thisisreallytheend.tumblr.com/