Some typos:
- [The priestess who gives you the basket] "The priestess who
whatcheswatches for her does so from the cliffs" - [When you get the ribbon] "As though I were back in my old
montainsmountains" - [Bolg] "She didn't
askedask for permission. And her devotees wereviolentsviolent. (...)AnA horrible noise from outside " - [A ghost] "The paintress is now free. She has
finisedfinished her work here" - [Ending] "Maybe it's time
tofor me to climb the high cliffs to go outside" - [Felung's ghost] "Fire and stream". Was "fire and steam" intended?
And some things that sound wrong to me, but I'm not a native English speaker:
- [Manarwn's ghost] "Come to me again
ifwhen you travel alone" - [Ending] "Maybe it's enough
tofor you, maybe not" - [Ending] "And maybe I'm alone here for a too long time" => "And maybe I've been alone here for too long"
- [The priestess who gives you the bell] "The only testimony to the Nameless Godess of the LLWYN's path" => I can't parse this sentence