Spoilers ahead. read at your own caution.
Theme: More explicit than most. Finding the new boundaries outside of the constraints of nobility, inducted into the spore colony, finding new horizons. It's present enough to be easily pointed to, which I think means you did well here. In this case, you having a shorter narrative meant you dug into the theme more, and it showed. Sometimes, less is more.
Story: Lesbians. Fungus Colony. Haughty mother. Running away. Iconic as always. You've done it again.
A bit brief, a bit rushed to the point, a bit jumbled in narrative flow, but fun as always. Your voice shines through, and your idiosyncratic voice is a delight to consume.
Also, yay lesbians! Appreciate your focus on other spaces (mushroom lovers too lol).
Presentation: The rain was nice! I liked the Baroque(?) music for the palace.
My main issue was that the mushroom wolf wasn't mushroomy enough. I wanted MORE. That was a wolf with hint of mushroom. I wanted her to be flooded with mushroom growth, like the mushroom armor in Elden Ring. I also appreciated the cg.
Creativity: I stan dating the mushroom colony queen. The origin of it was also curious, with another woman having being tragically lost to make Queen come to fruition. I maybe wanted more plot beats though to get to that point. It's a bit rushed, which kinda kills the flow.
Overall thoughts: I enjoy reading whatever you do. Your PoV is so wild, and that's what makes your works so curious to read. Thank you for sharing as always.