Thanks for the review!
And yeah my major mistake was to not add some necessary *fluff* to not interrupt the flow of the story. I think I cutted too much in the backstory before they met.
And yeah my issue with english is not that easy to go away with. I try my best to get understanding of languages to be better on my next projects for sure!
I could have gone more bonkers with the visuals too and to be fair I should have done some more trippy color art into it.
Hope you enjoyed my ride!