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This is really unique and the hand drawn art looks amazing, I love that the obstacles grow flowers rather than just being destroyed, that's a nice touch and fits with the general themes of the game. 

I think some more polish and feedback with animation/sound for when you hit the obstacles/power ups would really bring this to life. You could have some sort of voiceover or maybe gap in the obstacles so the player can properly read the text, that feature is unlike other submissions and a great addition.

Regardless of the time well done!

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Thank you for your comment !!

Yes I will definitely add feedbacks, I’m bad at sound design so I will also try to impove the visual feedbacks in addition to trying to find sounds that fit.

And thanks for the idea of the gap in the obstacle during the texts. I realized it was difficult to read while playing, i intended to make the texts last a little longer, but simplifying the level at the same time is a great idea :)  (Ideally I wanted the texts to be half scripted and half interacting with the actions of the player, something like in The stanley parable, but i don’t know if I will push the polish to this point)

That all sounds really good! Even in a longer game jam it would be difficult to polish all those bits so you did a great job!