Spoilers you know the drill.
Theme: You were one of the few who went literal, and in that regard, you've currently stood out (comparatively), so props for that. A very literal interpretation, but one that is obvious on sight.
Story: Short tale of relationship angst and third party facilitating confession, with some silly fourth wall breaks. I think you hit what you were aiming for.
Presentation: I think you did pretty good with your filtering and manipulation of the sprites for your goal, well done. Your music choices felt pretty appropriate, as I noted them all.
Creativity: Not as experimental as last year, but still an exercise in creativity all the same.
Overall thoughts: It's a short snack, and overall well constructed. You hit what you set out to do. Good job. I definitely snorted at the May Human and related content.