A unique approach to the jam's theme that is present throughout the story. The premise is simple, but NWS managed to convey the complicated emotions of the protagonist pretty well. The CGs, besides from looking amazing, are also effectively used to reinforce the mood. The choice of music is great as well.
Ignoring the unfortunate centerleft/centerright incident, the dialogue would benefit from more polishing. Personally, I think some lines felt a little unrealistic to be spoken by an actual person in a conversation. Some lines felt not in line with the characters and the other were like something from text messages instead. Perhaps the use of "lol" and "k" was meant to be a humor, but they got me distracted instead. And the references... I like what was referenced (don't burn me at the stake), but it was repeated too much.
On the technical side, I love how you use the NVL mode. It's a good idea for that scene. However, you should probably use "nvl clear" to break the monologue. Having the new text appear on the bottom part of the screen, the same place as the usual dialogue box, kinda defeats the purpose of NVL mode.
Forgot to mention: some pauses in the dialogue would be nice. I believe it wasn't intentional, but that transition (or the lack thereof) between the final scene and the afterword felt a bit jarring.
Nevertheless, NWS is an enjoyable short read and definitely hits the mark.