I enjoyed reading through the ruleset and was attracted to both the themes, setting and playstyle, but in its present incarnation I'm a little foggy as to how the game moves forward after the first scene: in a nutshell, the mechanics surrounding the action cards!
But yes, this is a wonderful game and you should be proud of what you have achieved here. Have you playtested it yet? I'd be most intrigued to read a report of a session!