I really liked your entry and the short story/teaser that you told. The writing for Timothy's monologue especially hit me in the feels and I felt like your writing was really engaging during this section. My only problems that I have are that the writing felt a bit rushed between Winston and Josiah and the transitions were pretty abrupt. If Winston and Josiah's interactions were expanded on and more transition text or description was given, then that would help the flow of the narrative for me.
Oh, the intro section between Timothy and Maria was really amazing with all the sprite movements and the scene slowly gaining more detail, like a polaroid picture would. Also for the time that you were able to put this entry together, I think it turned out really well. I plan to check out PRESSED when I've got fewer May Wolves on the mind.