I agree that the other scenes between the bear and son were quite rushed. The beginning part would have been the same, but the ending would have been more wholesome. At the time, I was still a bit confused about the whole "My Wolf" concept. I wrote it with the son and father relationship as the one in mind. Based on some joke comments I took seriously on the board, I then thought the story HAD to contain NSFW elements, and I didn't think a father/son 'interaction' would be appropriate, so the rest was crammed in around it. I plan to make substantial changes once we have the freedom to update again to return it more to my original vision. I appreciate the feedback!