it feels like a pretty ambitious undertaking, i feel like it's trying to represent Everything. I like that it starts with I. It's a really good use of hypertext fiction to represent an interconected web of influences
It is indeed a bit ambitious, and I somewhat struggled with it at times and did various changes and revisions. Eventually I came to the point where I thought it was as good as I could make it, and I'm somewhat satisfied with the result. Glad that you liked it!
