This is on so many levels more pedantic than I need to be but pet peeve about the title. Hungers is singular (he hungers, they hunger), but woods is plural. The title should be The Woods Hunger. Every time I see the title it just sounds very slightly off and its gotten under my skin lol.
Edit: In fact this seems to be a persistent issue in the story. Small instances of the wrong plurality. Not enough to break the experience but it could do with an editing pass.
The title is on purpose as in The Woods is a singular, monstrous being. The same way you say 'It Hungers'. Where 'It' = The Woods. It's a name that invokes a being that.. you don't want to call directly 👀
But thank you for the input! Will be combing through the chapters again when I'm updating for chapter 3.
Hope the next update will be up to your standards, english is not my first language, so I'll have to work twice as hard here.
Ahhh ok, that just sounds clumsy in my head due to my expectations then. Just at a glance with no prior knowledge of the game, its hard to intuit that context.
I totally understand the second language struggles and wish you the best! Its mostly very small issues, enough for me to notice but not enough to turn me off the game entirely. Looking forward to more ^^
