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thebigtabletop5 years ago(+1)

Just read. Here are a few thoughts:

  • The cover art is great! AND ANOTHER BRANDON SANDERFAN! +1
  • Funny enough, the tone of this reminds me of Eric Scholes work. Nice.
  • Love the heroes and their illustrations. The description of the Death Oath is AWESOME and sets tone amazingly well.
  • Both your mundane skills, archetypes, and boons are GREAT!!!
  • The entire sample adventure... wow. Dude this is awesome. And the fact that you have one was a great use of your time.

I generally don't like RPGs that feel so railroad-esque but this is easily one of my favorite entries from the Jam. AMAZING JOB!!!

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beruda5 years ago

Hey, thanks!

  • I love Brandon Sanderson.
  • I’m not sure who Eric Schole is, and google was no help 😅
  • Thanks, most of my time was spent working on both the visual tone and the tone of the writing, so I’m glad it resonated so much.
  • I like the mundane/archetype/boon trio as well, but I feel it’s missing something.
  • The sample adveture... again, I’m glad that you like it, but I feel it would have benefited from a good few editing passes, but only so much can be done in 48h I guess.

I’m sorry I’m only now responding to your comment, but I’ve been busy with school this past week or two. I wish I had had time to include a more detailed review of everyones work, but I only managed to read through everything and give ratings.

Anyway, I’m glad that you liked the game, and thank you for the review. It’s a great boon (heh) to know which parts resonated so much.

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