We had similar viewpoints when it came to each other's entries it seems; I'm not a big fan of alien stories or 3rd person perspectives. And yet, this VN turned out to be one of my favorites.
The writing, despite the perspective, is phenomenal. Maybe it can get overly descriptive, but I don't see that as a problem at all, if you know how to write in a captivating way (and in your case, you definitely do!). The characters all had distinct voices and personalities, with emotions and goals and backstories that, if only implied, still seep into every word they say to each other.
This may have killed my vocal chords, since I read 90% of it out loud on stream and it was quite the long read, but it was enjoyable from start to finish, with a presentation so polished and professional, I almost can't believe you really did this all in one month.
My only gripe is how o u r p l e everything is, and it doesn't seem to serve for anything other than aesthetics, but that's really minor and I can easily overlook. It's my favorite color anyways!
All in all, I'm blown away. It's a crime this entry isn't getting the attention it deserves. Congrats on a truly incredible piece of art Kraaj ♡