It's an interesting concept to be sure. I like the premise of it the general story, though some parts would have been better if it followed the "show don't tell" mantra.
For exemple, although that would have increased the story lenght significantly, Queen as a character would have been more endearing had we seen Patrycja's story directly rather than queen telling us. It's something to tell us that "she was nice" but it usually has more impace to actually show us she was nice.
There is a lot of that, though sometimes maybe you can't help it for logistical reasons (like having to do more sprites) I don't think it's a good idea to use the "let me tell you my stroy and/or my situation" instead of showing it to us firsthand those facts.
That aside it was cute ^^