I really appreciate all the custom sprites, BGs, everything. Even the music too! Though it didn't make it into the game, it's a pretty good piece. It's unfortunate how you stumble upon the... technical difficulties, but I guess that's part of the learning curve of VN development, eh?
The plot itself is fun, but I can see why some people yawn while reading it. Audio is a pretty important piece for a VN. Right, I'm not gonna dig further into things that are possibly unintentional mistakes because of the... circumstances. On another note, the "pool" scene was a bit difficult to digest. Not that you didn't describe the scene enough. In fact, it's the exact opposite. You went into details but it felt like something that's written for a novel. It could work better for a text-only medium, but in a visual novel, the readers would instinctively carve for supporting visuals for scenes that involve meticulous details.
My main gripe is the MC. I don't know if it's intentional, but damn, he's really helpless. I lost my mind when he barraged Colton with questions instead of getting a grip on the situation. Even after the pursuit, he kept doing this. Of course, it's very normal for someone to have lots of questions given the situation, but the way the conversation flowed wasn't fluid. If I were the wolf, I'd just ditch him. Call it a personal preference, but god knows we've had enough of helpless main characters in FVN space.
This VN has a lot of potential, I'm looking forward to seeing the project after the patch-up.