HERE BE SPOILERS
Honestly, I find this one is banking a little too hard on its premise. I feel like, if it wasn’t for this set up, say if they were cornered while being hunt down or running out of supplies while stranded on a mountain, the conversation here (literal and metatextual) would not be nearly as engaging. My feelings aren’t “damn, I’m sad for Nova and Albert,” but more “damn, I’d hate to be in their place,” which I’m not sure this is going for.
Thank you for the feedback, and I agree. If I were writing a story with the premises you provided, I would have to completely rewrite my project as those are completely incompatible concepts with the text and themes of my VN. That said, I did not write the "trapped in a cabin with dwindling supplies" or the "getting hunted down by someone" story. I wrote Astrophobia. While I'm glad you at least felt empathy for my characters, as I attempted to emphasize with the story being in first person present tense, I'm sorry you didn't feel any sympathy for them.
