I liked the writing a lot in this one, it managed to set the mood perfectly. The story lacked some better payoff, but I enjoyed the journey. I loved the music too, although like with every other asset in the game, it could use some better transitions.
Visually, the VN is kind of bare bone and I feel like it lacks a clear vision. While the backgrounds were decent on their own, the overall VN lacks direction: for example, in the first few minutes we move from very bright backgrounds (almost blindingly so) to a dark dimly lit room.