Hi Thank you for your nice comment. It really makes me happy and frankly, it means a lot that you felt some emotions out of the story (I'd appreciate it if we could keep it spoiler-free, too! lol).
I also appreciate your feedback on the language. It's an important insight for me, too. I do fine in life and work generally but good writing is kind of the core of visual novels so, I was extra antsy about it. Glad to know there are no catastrophic errors. haha