The narrative and illustrations are very good!
I'm a bit sad with the result of my choices (SPOILER: the tree was cut down), but I think this impact is important for the story, especially thinking about folklore in general.
Regarding the language, I also don't speak native English and I've created visual novels in the past, so I understand your insecurity, but I didn't notice any flaws, everything seems correctly written/translated.
Congrats for the submission! 😊