I had to play it again outside the stream to make my own opinion and...
I LOVE the presentation. It's minimalistic but purposeful, and makes the whole package unique. The writing is excellent. The trope of machine/alien learning to become human never bores me. The "rebound" being a bit literal is a pleasant surprise. Also +1 point for having a tentacle monster facefucking the MC.
I won't repeat all the others have said but I do have some gripes of my own. I feel like, for some reason, given how the overall story is designed, I couldn't find it to be personal enough. Sure there are good moments of character development, but I couldn't relate or empathize enough with the characters on an emotional level. On the other hand, I also think it's not sci-fi enough? Maybe that's just my personal preference with this kind of story.
Overall it's a solid one!