I like y'all's clear focus on impact of humans on animals, I think that is a very important topic. I like all of your brainstorming docs, but I wonder if perhaps you can make a clearer main player-character? I can see what you are trying to do, but I think the idea would come across a bit better if I knew who I would be paying as (some animal dislocated due to human activity?) and what I would be doing.