Amazing little story! You made me care for the characters, good job. And the world seems to be bigger than portrayed, great job on the world building ^^.
The art in panels looks great and stylish, the way the camera moves with a little motion blur adds soooooo much polish, makes it look like a finished game x3. That transition from light to dark with a small spooky moment is great.
Tried all three endings, thanks for the fast text feature ^^. The spooky one is super good. I guess I only wish that there was the panel with the girl drawn using the toy because a steampunk vibrator sounds like such a cool idea x3
Great job, really!