Let's start with the bright side. The presentation is really slick and anyone can tell there is a lot of research dedicated to this project. The whole idea is probably the most unique among the jam entries. While the concept is intriguing, sadly it's not my cup of tea. I can't understand all those... words... and the history/political side is just not something I can get through. I'm just too puppy-brained >.<
I think Hetalia works because we are a bit familiar with the stereotypes of world countries, but here, I feel like a complete stranger. And My Municipality tries to thread the lines between something entertaining and serious, while the other is mostly outrageously hilarious.
That being said, the "story" did leave some emotional sadness, anger, and disappointment (?) at the conclusion of the story. A relationship broken over... nothing. Ooofff.
Overall it sure is an interesting read. Not my cup of tea, but it could be yours!