I adore your writing and as NB, I'm very impressed at how inclusive this IF is. Speaking of inclusivity, however, I played as an afab NB MC, and in a few scenes it referred to their vagina as "womanhood" and that ruined my immersion. I know it wasn't your intention to offend, especially considering how inclusive the IF itself is in general, but I can see this being dysphoric to other trans ppl.
Outside of this, I love everything about your IF. I've read through so many IFs that I thought there's nothing that could surprise me in an IF, but yours is a genuine delight to read. All the characters are interesting in their own way and it's so hard to pick just one romance option, and the way you handle virginity (especially in that one scene with Ly is so good. I don't usually play virgin MCs but I'm so glad I decided to try it out because I adore Ly in that scene, genuinely may have made them my favourite RO. (Leese is a strong contender tho.)