So, after playing through it three times, I have noticed quite a few instances where tenses are switched almost randomly, sometimes within a single sentence. (Mostly from present to past at times where it should stay in present.) I don't think that is something that matters to a lot of people, but as an author and editor it felt noticable. Idk if that is something you want to tackle at all or not, but if you do, I'd offer to do a thorough readthrough for consistency.