hi Caribdis, honestly the writing (as well as other areas) is top-notch and reminds me of one of my favorite stories, which is Greed Island in HxH.
Could I give you a personal feedback of removing shoes when characters are home, at the very least on their bedrooms? It makes me feel not-so-good weird whenever I see them on their beds with the shoes they used to walk around..
Sorry that you feel angry and that yes I did make a personal bias request! I'm developing games too so I understand how selfish that is, but I can't help it! It's these concerns that make developing games so fun and rewarding for me xD
And yes, of course, my games will never have shoes on beds!! I'm not so sure where you're from or your culture, but that concern is shared by many many people in Southeast Asia, China, Japan, Taiwan, and Korea at the very least.
I'm from Austria, we remove our shoes in the antechamber - it's basic - except for cops lol, they don't remove their shoes when they enter your home (and before you ask, no they didn't come for me lol) - and it's irritating.
But, besides that I didn't even notice, I find it a super weird request :D
Sorry if I was a bit overly dramatic initially. I didn't mean to offend I was just a bit shocked ;)