Thanks for the honest review! I will admit I am not a native speaker when it comes to english and overall I have never wrote extensive dialogues like that (especially in one go), to say that I had little experience for that. So your impression may be right. The intention is that this game appeals to everyone and the joke was meant to be a fun change to lift a bit up the mood. Some people may not like this constant depressive mood and to go a bit against that I decided to but a mood changer. But my bad writing might be so weird that it just harmed the game so yeah. Still in that case it is important for me that you understood my intention as I did it with purpose like many things in the game. Still thanks for your point on view on it. It is an important aspect on my games to work on.