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It was a flashback from an event before game started. (So no, you didn't miss anything)

OK. It feels really weird. Given the way Rei is introduced as someone you just met, without having just met them, it's a bit odd. At the very least, either the flashback would serve better to be immediately after the introduction, or just to be phrased differently (like not making such a strong point about having just met them before). That's my take anyway. If I had to choose one to recommend, I'd say moving the flashback closer would possibly be easier and more effective (if you wanted to worry about it, otherwise just a note for future projects maybe). 

I do have to say I've enjoyed it so far, and also quite the Reboot Love games too (been looking forward to more of that).